I was playing Pokemon Diamond and I was battling some trainer with my eevee.It was night time in the Pokemon world and my eevee just got a high enough level to evolve into an umbreon.It did the evolution screen but eevee didn't evolve."What the hell?",I said looking at the screen in confusion.Eevee does not want to evolve."ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!",I yelled.I tried at least,I don't know,around 50 times."Okay.It's pointless.Eevee doesn't want to evolve then fine.I'm still going to train her to be the best ever.Evolution or not,my eevee will be the best pokemon ever!",I said.
Something on the screen popped up.Eevee said from inside the ds,"Can you let me hold the everstone if you really want me to be the best ever?Please?""Um.......sure.",I said confused."Thank you.Wait.You don't have an everstone.",Eevee said."Than what do we do?I don't have guide book that'll tell me where an everstone is.",I said still confused."Well,we can't buy one.You can get them from trading but that'll take to long.Guess our only option is to look for it.Best place would probably be in a cave.",Eevee said.We searched all of Sinnoh for one but we couldn't."Guess we have to trade.",Eevee said irritated.We tried to trade but it wouldn't let us.Eevee yelled something but I couldn't quite hear it,but it did sound like she yelled fuck."Great.Just great.Every time I level up,I'm going to evolve into either a Espeon or an Umbreon.",Eevee said sadly."Guess evolution is our only choice left.So,you want to evolve into a Flareon?""Nah.""Vaporeon?""Nope.""Jolteon?""No.""Glaceon?""Not while I'm alive.""Leafeon?""Not happening.""Espeon?""Too much psychic power.""Well I guess the only choice left is Umbreon.""I'd rather die than be nocturnal.""Oh I forgot.I did have a everstone but I gave it to another Pokemon....that I.........traded.Hehe.Oh look at the time.I gotta take a shower.",I said about to shut off the ds.
"You idiot!I didn't want to evolve but you gave away my last hope of staying as an eevee!Let's see how you like it to transform!",Eevee yelled at me."I'm sorry,okay?I didn't know that this would happen!My friend wanted an everstone to give to one of his Pokemon that he also didn't want to evolve!I'm so sorry.Please forgive me.",I said sadly."No!You had your chance,girl!But it's to late!",Eevee yelled at me.My ears grew long and moved to the top of my head.My hair turned into black fur and started to cover my entire body."Please stop!I'll do anything you want just as long as you keep me human!",I cried with a tear."No you stupid ignorant human!",Eevee yelled.My mouth stretched out a little.My nose turned into a black fox nose.My hands and feet turned into paws which forced me to go on all fours.I grew a tail that looked liked my new ears.My legs grew smaller.Four yellow circles appeared at my knees and one appeared on my forehead.I tried to cry for help but all I could say was umbreon.Another circle appeared around the tip of my tail and two more appeared around my ears.My eyes grew bigger and turned red.My pupils stayed green.I was done transforming."Umbreon!",I cried as I got onto my bed feeling sleepy.
I yawned and fell asleep under the blankets."Hey Chrisy.Are you okay?I heard something coming from up here so I came to check on you to see if you were okay.",my mom said coming into my room.She saw me under the blankets and thought I was sleeping(which I was)."She's still asleep.I better leave her alone.",my mom said going back downstairs.I woke up a couple hours later feeling refreshed.I stretched my entire body feeling numb.That was a weird dream I had,I thought to myself.I tried to say something but all that came out was umbreon.So it wasn't a dream.I'm really an Umbreon."Umbre.",I said sadly.I heard my dad coming up the stairs to my room.I started to get scared."Umbreon!",I cried as I ran under my bed.
"I wonder where Chrisy's at.",my dad said.I was so scared that I must've muttered a faint umbre.I guess my dad heard me and he saw me under the bed."What the heck is that?",my dad said."Umbreon.",I said shivering and beginning to cry.My dad moved his hand toward me head.I backed away as far as I could until I hit the wall."It must be scared.I better get Gabby.",my dad said leaving my room(Gabby's my mom).My mom came in with my dad,brother,and sisters."The thing looks scared to death.Everyone give it some space.",my mom said."Umbre.",I said softly.Everyone backed away from the bed.I started to come out.My cat,Jasper,came in and went under the bed.I backed away towards the wall again."Hi.I'm Jasper.May I ask what you are?",Jasper meowed softly."I'm Chrisy and I was a human but no I'm an Umbreon.",I said sadly."Chrisy?Is that really you?!What happened to you?!",Jasper said."It's a long story.",I said."I've got some time.Let's hear it.",Jasper said.I told him the whole story."Wow.I've heard some crazy stuff but a game talking to you through the speakers turning someone into a creature from that game,that's horrible.I'm sorry that happened to you Chrisy.",Jasper said rubbing his head against mine trying to comfort me.
"Come on out.It's going to be okay Chrisy.If they try to do something to you then I'll protect you.You are my master after all.You took care of me and saved me from the pound.It's time I repay the favor.",Jasper said.I came out from under the bed and I still felt scared.Everyone gasped and Jasper just stayed close to me if something happened."What is that thing?",my mom said."Umbreon.",I cried still a little scared."What the heck is an Umbreon?",my dad said looking at my brother and sister."It's a Pokemon.They were supposed to be fake but I can't believe we're seeing one before our very eyes.",my brother said."It must've been through alot.What's your name?",my sister said."I'm.......Chrisy.",I said struggling to still say human words."That's Chrisy?!OH MY GOD!",everyone yelled and passed out.Jasper just looked at them like they were nuts.
Everyone(except Jasper)was worried about what would happen to me if anybody ever saw me."I'm sorry this happened Chris.I really am.",my mom said sadly.I climbed onto her lap and she started to pet me."Umbre.",I said softly.I heard the door bell ring.I jumped off my mom's lap and walked downstairs.My dad answered the door and I was right next to him in the door way.A friend of mine was at the door."Is Chrisy home?I wanted to show her something.",my friend asked looking at me."Um......About that.Your looking at her.",my dad said."Say what?!That's Chrisy?!",my friend said surprised."Umbreon.",I said."We actually don't know what happened to her.It was a shocker to us to.",my dad said,"But you can still come in."My friend was sitting on the couch petting me on the head.It felt good.I was kicking my leg uncontrollably.
"Oh.I wanted to give you something that'll help your eevee grow stronger.",my friend said heading up to my room.I followed him up the stairs.He turned on the ds and I suddenly remembered why I transformed."Umbreon!",I cried as I tried knock the ds out of his hand.Too late.There's nothing I could do now.The fool's already turned on the ds.I was waiting for him to finish transforming.He transformed into a Vaporeon."What the hell happened to me?!",my friend said."Now you know how I transformed.",I said.
"Oh my mom is going to freak out when she's me like this.",my friend said."Oh well.I tried to warn ya but it was to late.",I said glaring at him,"Let's just hope more people don't do the same thing you did."5 days later........."Great.Now everyone here is an evolution of an eevee.Your all stupid you know that,right?",I said glaring at everybody(which was just my sisters,my friend,my brother,my mom,and my dad.My dad's a Flareon,my mom's an Espeon,my sister is an Glacieon and my other sister is a Leafeon,and my brother's a Jolteon)."Well sorry.",my brother said angrily."Well now what do we do?We can't go out into public.People would call the police then we'll get experimented on and etc.",my mom said."We can go live in a forest that has a long river or a big lake.There is a forest like that a couple miles away.We can leave now.It is dark out.No body can see us.",I suggested."That's not a very bad idea.",my dad said.
We left right away and were very cautious with being spotted.We made it to the forest.We all knew to stay together at all times.Me and my friend are gf and bf.We've loved each other for a long time.Humans see us every once in a while but no body believes them.We took the ds with us and left it in the middle of the forest.It turned into a stone over time.It looked like a pokeball.It's affects changed,it changed that whoever touches it turns into an eevee or one of the eevee evolutions.It used to be whoever turns it one transforms but it's not like that any more.After a year or two,the forest was filled with eevee,jolteon,flareon,vaporeon,espeon,glacieon,leafeon,and umbreon.My family could tell each other different from the others because we put gray markings on each other.It's marvelous here,I never want to go back to my old life.
EDIT: WHY IS THIS MY MOST VIEWED DEVIATION? Personally, I feel like it's one of my mediocre ones. Not my favorite, but not my hated.
are you making a sequel
are you making a sequel
that eevee was mean,but i kinda understands where he comes from.
And what about Sylveon?
This was made before Sylveon. Look at the year it was made.
Yeah. But I can see why you would ask. With all the eeveelutions being in it and with a new one out.
Maybe a sequel or a redux is in order?
That was a good story and WHERE IS THAT DS AND FOREST. Iwant to see live pokemon and become a pokemon
i must say, a great story
show me the ds pls :3
oh sure.let me find i-.*smacks it at coshy's head*there.happy?
I haven't seen a story this good in a long time, keep making more!
you arent very good at grammar but im not either
is that a comment or an insult?
Awsome. just pure awesome.
I love it! Awsome story
awesome love it
first off, that is the coolest sprite fusion i've ever seen(spiritomb and rayquayza, right?) and second, good story
everything happened kind of fast though
everything happened kind of fast though